Darkest Fantasy by Molly Diamond

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Title: Darkest Fantasy
Author: Molly Diamond   

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Publisher: Breathless Press

Genre: Erotic

Length: 15 pgs.
Reviewed by: Rob's Wife

RATINGS FOR:

Cover: 5

Presentation: 5

Editing: 4.5

Story: 3

Writing Ability: 3

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About The Book: In the middle of the forest, Jonathan discovers an enticing beauty dancing with strange beings. Is she real or merely his darkest fantasy?


The Review:

The author put this story together very well and making Jonathon choose between a woman and the gems was an interesting twist. The author voiced her story well and left me wanting to read more.

This story was well written as it flows together nicely without jumping or being disjointed, but I had no idea where the author was going with it. I didn't know who the female was, or if she was good or evil. Ending too abruptly for my liking, the story left me feeling it was incomplete.

That being said, I did enjoy the writer's style and I would definitely read more of her work.

Pagan Elements: Yes

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Delectable Interview by Molly Diamond

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Title: Delectable Interview

Author: Molly Diamond

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Publisher: Breathless Press

Genre: Contemporary Romance

Length: 15 pgs.
Reviewed by: Strega

RATINGS FOR:

Cover: 3

Presentation: 4

Editing: 4

Story: 4

Writing Ability: 4

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About The Book: Tara is getting ready to go on a job interview while her friend Sally looks on. With Sally's approval at her appearance, Tara is ready for Sally to give her a ride to the job site but Sally says her car is in the garage and she's arranged for Tara's ex, Tony to do the driving. Tara doesn't mind that Tony is going to drive her since they've remained friends, however, Tara can never turn down Tony when he wants sex because she wants him back. Today's ride is going to wind up much the same but Tony has a little surprise for her.

The Review: This is a quick little read and although it says fifteen pages, the actual reading is only about seven pages long. That aside, I liked this story. There is just something very romantic about two people who have split up but remained friends, espcially when both want to be a couple again, though they are afraid to tell the other. Ms. Diamond has penned a romantic, sexy, hot little story in Delectable Interview that I enjoyed. If you are looking for something to read while you eat lunch, this one is a no calorie, no fat dessert just for you!

Pagan Elements: None

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Harley Afternoon Delight by Molly Diamond

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Title: Harley Afternoon Delight
Author: Molly Diamond 

Author Site: http://mollydiamond.wordpress.com

Buy Link: www.breathlesspress.com/erotic/forthcoming/harley-afternoon-delight.html
Publisher: Breathless Press

Genre: Contemporary/Erotic/Romance/M-F

Length: Short

RATINGS FOR:

Cover: 4-Very hot!

Presentation: 4

Editing: 4 (Found a few mistakes)

Story: 3

Writing Ability: 3.5

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Reviewed by: Strega

About The Book:

The Review: This story is purely for titillation purposes only. There is no plot, no tension, no intrigue, and really no reason for this story other than an attempt to turn the reader on. I found the dialogue trite and unconvincing, the sex was under whelming and the characters were one-dimensional. I felt as if I was reading a letter to a girly magazine: Dear Editor, You'll never guess what happened when I looked out my window and saw my neighbor mowing the lawn in a thong…

When I read at the end of the story that the author had written for Hustler Magazine, I understood why the story had that trashy feel to it. I'm sure there are many who enjoy reading this type of work and for those, this will be a treat. As for me, the story just didn't do a thing.

Pagan Elements: None

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