Harley Afternoon Delight by Molly Diamond

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Title: Harley Afternoon Delight
Author: Molly Diamond 

Author Site: http://mollydiamond.wordpress.com

Buy Link: www.breathlesspress.com/erotic/forthcoming/harley-afternoon-delight.html
Publisher: Breathless Press

Genre: Contemporary/Erotic/Romance/M-F

Length: Short

RATINGS FOR:

Cover: 4-Very hot!

Presentation: 4

Editing: 4 (Found a few mistakes)

Story: 3

Writing Ability: 3.5

Overall Card Rating: 

Reviewed by: Strega

About The Book:

The Review: This story is purely for titillation purposes only. There is no plot, no tension, no intrigue, and really no reason for this story other than an attempt to turn the reader on. I found the dialogue trite and unconvincing, the sex was under whelming and the characters were one-dimensional. I felt as if I was reading a letter to a girly magazine: Dear Editor, You'll never guess what happened when I looked out my window and saw my neighbor mowing the lawn in a thong…

When I read at the end of the story that the author had written for Hustler Magazine, I understood why the story had that trashy feel to it. I'm sure there are many who enjoy reading this type of work and for those, this will be a treat. As for me, the story just didn't do a thing.

Pagan Elements: None

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