Nerd In A Wolf Suit by Laine Morgan

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Title:  Nerd in a Wolf Suit
Author:  Laine Morgan 

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Publisher:  Champagne Books

Genre: paranormal romance

Length: 157 pgs.

Other:  M/F

Reviewed by: Keri Stratton Alley

About The Book: Phoebe Morin thinks vampires are stalking her for the microchip her late husband left taped to the back of a photograph. After a vicious attack, Phoebe finds an unlikely protector in the office nerd, Drew Montana.


Despite his issues with socializing, Drew is curious about the microchip, which seems to hold the secret of the vampire universe. He is also the best one to protect Phoebe; killing the undead is what he does best. During the full moon, the introverted Drew transforms into a sexy, dangerous wolf with a mission to kick vampire ass. But when Phoebe presents him with the mysterious microchip, the full moon has waned. Can he discover its secret and protect Phoebe without the strength of the werewolf?

The Review: Ms. Morgan gave her male lead an interesting combination of characteristics that provides a fun dichotomy of personality. In regular form, he has Asperser's syndrome; a psychiatric diagnosis that the character manifests as painful shyness, meticulousness and a reclusive, habitual lifestyle. However, Drew is also a werewolf; fierce, fearless, instinctual and wild, but only for three days a month. Phoebe, the female lead, brings out the wolf in Drew as he struggles to save her from a relatively ineffective group of vampires and a few poltergeists.

This book reads fairly smoothly as the characters try to figure out why the vampires would want a microchip and discover their growing attraction to each other. The sex scenes were tantalizing, but not too explicit; just enough to pique the reader’s interest. I thought Ms. Morgan’s proposed theory for the weakening, and ultimate destruction, of the vampire race was original and quirkily funny.   

Pagan Elements: None

Cover (Rated 1-10): 6–I liked that it was drawn instead of photographed.

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Bane of His Existence by Melody Knight

    
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Title:  Bane of His Existence

Author:  Melody Knight

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Publisher:  Carnal Passions

Genre: Fantasy/Erotic Romance/M/F

Other: Shape shifter/werewolf

Length: 54 pgs.

Reviewed by: Violet Harper

About The Book: Charlie Ascott is a werewolf. He's been cursed with the condition for the last four years, doesn't recall the one who infected him, and has learned to live with it. The only thing he can't quite handle is the lust he feels for a certain she-wolf. He catches her scent every month at full moon, but when it's absent for a few days, he's beside himself. Some day he intends to track her down, but he's not ready for that "wolves mate for life" connection. When he catches a familiar scent in the elevator, he realizes it's her—his she-wolf. Suddenly, he's more ready for a connection than he realized.

Verity Connors is a manager in the company where Charlie works. She has been afraid of intimacy and friendships ever since she was bitten. She's a werewolf, and she keeps to herself, focusing on her work to avoid letting instinct run away with her. When she meets Charlie, though, she decides she's been playing solitaire far too long. It's time to take a chance, and Charlie's the one she wants to risk all with. The only way to do that is to let instinct run its course.

The Review: The first chapter starts strong. It’s an interesting idea and it begins with humor and wit. Because it’s a short story, the plot is simplistic. Two wolves who have no idea how they got that way, or what it means in their lives, find one another. This idea works well for a short story, but it relies completely on the quality of the character development. Unfortunately, this story consists mostly of exposition. There is little sensory language. The reader has no real idea what anyone, or anything, looks like. Scenes ripe for eroticism lack the sensory detail that readers need in order to feel what the characters feel. There is no clear differentiation between Charlie’s and Verity’s personalities. They both seem paranoid and they both seem to have the same conflict, handily resolved by forming a romantic relationship with one another. Because we don’t really get to know either character, we don’t care when they get together. This may be a blessing since the erotic scenes are glossed over as part of the exposition.

The spiritual aspects of the werewolf are completely overlooked. Both characters treat it like a virus. Full moons trigger outbreaks. Being a wolf is something with which the characters learn to cope instead of embrace and accept. It isn’t herpes; it’s an intrinsic part of who each of these people are. 

The stream of consciousness writing style, complete with incomplete sentences, thoughts left hanging, and mid-paragraph flips from third to second person point of view, made this story difficult to follow. Intermittent high ideals and an overused word-of-the-day calendar collide in an explosion of awkward wording that vacillates from formal to conversational to something that attempts to approximate the hardboiled detective writing of Hammett or Chandler. Words like ‘maladroit’ and ‘twat’ don’t work well together in this piece of writing. I could see it working in a comedic piece, but there was nothing funny about this story. Additionally, the author could benefit from an honest critique partner and an editor with an eye for misused commas, overused ellipses, and knowledge of the difference between ejected and ejaculated.

I can see the potential in this story and with this author, but it hasn’t yet been fully realized.

Pagan Elements: None

Cover (Rated 1-10): 7- A kissing couple, wolves in the background, and a cityscape below them make for an eye-catching cover.

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