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May 19, 2011

Layover by DD Symms


Title: Layover
Author: DD Symms
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Publisher: Breathless Press
Genre: Erotic Romance
Length: 27 pgs.
Reviewed by: L
ana Sullivan

Cover: 5
Presentation: 4
Editing: 4
Story: 3
Writing Ability: 4

Overall Card Rating:

About The Book:
Jessie misses her flight connection and is forced to layover in Chicago. Determined to make the most of her night, she gets friendly with fellow passenger Devon. When the hotel assigned to them has only one room available, their evening plans are set. What Jessie isn’t expecting are the phone calls to Devon’s girlfriend, and the kinky twists the fun takes.

The Review:
Layover is well written and easy to read, and the kink adds an interesting twist. The dialogue and lack of emotional depth kept it from really pulling me in, however. There were a few places I wanted to tell the characters to shut up and get busy, but since that was also the D/s-type element, it might be just what another reader loves. I will be looking for more DD Symms stories.


DD Symms said...

Thanks for a fair and thoughtful review and I'm glad you're going to look for more of my stories. :)

The emotional depth in the characters comes out much more in my new release Riding Shotgun. I have another story, 15,000 words appx, that will go deeper into the character as well as a novel I'm finishing.

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